Welcome! Since I write
culinary mysteries, “Parsley, Sage, and Rosemary Time” deals with food topics
and with mysteries. This month I am sharing ways to kill people—in your
mysteries, of course—and some tips on getting away with it! To avoid the
pronoun problem, I’ll use heesh (he or she), shis (his or hers), and shim (him
or her) throughout the entries. Tune in for murder and mayhem.
While I found lots of R
words to support the criminal intent of this series, there weren’t so many
killing options.
Recidivism is
lapsing back into crime. Retromorphosis
is a change for the worse, definitely akin to recidivism. A rampallion
is a scoundrel or villain. That rampallion
may also be rantipole (wild and
disorderly).
Most of our literary villains are ruthless. But did you know that ruthless
is a form of ruth, what our protagonist
might be? A person who is ruth shows
pity, remorse, or sorrow. Heesh has compassion for the misery of others.
Ratine is to
practice sabotage against. That could be an interesting plot line, particularly
if someone dies during the sabotage. An innocent perhaps, or even the one being
sabotaged could be “collateral damage” in a sabotage attempt.
Some of the death methods we have discussed result in rubor (redness of the body resulting
from excess blood).
I didn’t use raticide
(substance that kills rats) because we’ve done poison. And I didn’t do rebullition (act of boiling up or
effervescing) since that was too close to boiling your people dinner in cannibalism.
I also rejected revet (face with masonry) because it was too close to
obvallate. Same with riem (rawhide thong). I thought it too close to knout and
quirt.
I considered describing retiary
(using nets as weapons) but couldn’t see how that would kill. Nets capture,
then another method results in death. So here we are at rafale and retorse.
Rafale would occur
in a battle with drug lords or war zone novels. Rafale is a burst of artillery in quick rounds. Perhaps a soldier
has PTSD and fires at shis comrades or a village of civilians. I assume that
any automatic weapon purchased legally could be used in a mass shooting at a
shopping mall or a hospital emergency room. Rafale
is definitely ripped from today’s headlines.
Retorse is more
difficult to pull off and not as quick a death. I see the use of retorse in an historical mystery. Retorse is bent backwards. Can’t you see
a medieval torture device meant to break a person in half? The pain would be
indescribable. But describing it would be your
job.
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Now, there's a challenge. Trying to figure out how nets could actually kill. There must be a way to make retiary work in a mystery novel. Maybe with some sort of sci-fi twist to it.
ReplyDeleteCheers - Ellen
Yeah, Ellen. I thought maybe strangling with the net once captured, but it takes a sharper mind than mine to figure it out. Weapon yes, killing tool, maybe. I've been AWOL due to some personal stuff, but I am headed back to your Nancy Drew tale to get caught up.
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